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A Slythern always pays his debts
Character Names: Severus Snape and Minatsuki Takami
When: Sometime this week, after the Halloween party
Location: Outside Minatsuki's bedroom
Summary: Minatsuki's comments and attacks during Halloween have pushed Snape over the edge, and he's out to teach her a lesson, wizard style.
Rating: PG-13, considering who's involved.
Warnings: Swearing. Violence. Two immature people beating the crap out of each other.
Status: Ongoing.
She really had nerve, that brat. That child. That silly girl. She didn't know what she was dealing with.
Maybe she didn't care.
For days Snape had been brooding, remembering his last encounter with Minatsuki Takami, remembering every insult, every slap, every slight. He brooded and nursed his anger until it was at a breaking point.
It was time to teach her a lesson.
Wand in pocket, Snape crept towards Minatsuki's room. The door was shut, but she had to be in there. His hands tightened around the wand's handle.
When: Sometime this week, after the Halloween party
Location: Outside Minatsuki's bedroom
Summary: Minatsuki's comments and attacks during Halloween have pushed Snape over the edge, and he's out to teach her a lesson, wizard style.
Rating: PG-13, considering who's involved.
Warnings: Swearing. Violence. Two immature people beating the crap out of each other.
Status: Ongoing.
She really had nerve, that brat. That child. That silly girl. She didn't know what she was dealing with.
Maybe she didn't care.
For days Snape had been brooding, remembering his last encounter with Minatsuki Takami, remembering every insult, every slap, every slight. He brooded and nursed his anger until it was at a breaking point.
It was time to teach her a lesson.
Wand in pocket, Snape crept towards Minatsuki's room. The door was shut, but she had to be in there. His hands tightened around the wand's handle.
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At first it was satisfying to see her in such distress, to see her scratch at her own throat until it was angry and red and blood built up under her nails.
Then she started screaming, and it was more than he could bear. Snape screwed up his face and shut his eyes.
"Shut up!" he yelled over the sounds of her anguished screams. He jabbed his wand at her, the motion for a Silencing Charm. When he was sure she was sufficiently quiet, he continued to mock her. "Not such a big shot now, are you? Not so confident anymore, so high and mighty? No? That's too bloody bad, isn't it?"
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One hand still hitting her neck, the sick slap of a bloodied palm meeting her equally bloodied flesh reverberating in her eardrums and - fuck it hurt. But he was close now. Close enough that she could reach out a hand - out and up, grappling for his wand hand away as another bloody whip lashed forward, aiming for his chest and stomach.
Minatsuki's pale lips spelled out a distinct 'fuck you' as she lashed at him, still refusing to give up. It had been forever since she'd been this helpless and...it felt terrible.
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"Keep struggling. It's only going to get worse, you know." Snape tapped a finger against his wand, considering.
"Perhaps I'd be willing to let you go, if..." He feigned considering something, thinking. What ever could he want from her? "I don't know. Apologize."
"Oh. Right. Hard to do that when you can't talk, isn't it?" He smiled at her, a cold and self-satisfied smile, smug, terrible. "Want to try anyway, girl?"
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Minatsuki's first instinct was to stick her tongue out. But that was stupid, childish and wasn't really going to be effective. Plus, she was starting to see double, and sticking out her tongue may or may not make her throw up. So Minatsuki set her jaw, tightly, and glared up at him. On arm was held protectively to her chest, ready to lash out and hit him at any moment, but the other rose slowly, and ever so gracefully...~
She flipped him the bird. A cold, hard, 'fuck you' in her gaze.
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The irony made a slight whistling noise as it soared over Snape's head.
"Predictable. You really have a way with words, you know. Your vulgarity does show a lack of intelligence. But maybe you'd like to try again?"
Snape jabbed his wand at her again, lifting the Silencing Charm. "Go on. Speak. Tell me you're sorry for what you did. Tell me you're sorry and that you'll leave me alone from now on."
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She was fighting something rather different. And it was...refreshing.
Her cheeks tinged pink and eyes seeming to pop angrily out of her head, the brunette's lip twitched. She could speak now, but purposefully bit back the initial "FUCK YOU" and took a chance to breath.
"...I'd do it again. You're fucking pathetic."
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"Pathetic?"
He takes a step closer to her. He's close to her now, close enough to see her flushed cheeks and the maddened expression in her eyes, the horrid detail of the welts on her throat and the blood on her face.
"Pathetic?"
His hands clench around his wand.
"I'm not pathetic, you stupid git. Look at the situation you're in now. You're pathetic! You're stupid, nasty and the most insufferable person I've ever met!"
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"I'm pathetic? Really? Because the last I checked, you're the one who's fucking strung me upside down because you can't handle a little bullying. You're so god damn weak and pathetic that you're making me helpless so you can feel better about yourself."
She'd admit she were helpless. But just to drive home the point that he was weak, and pathetic, and -
"You're not hurting me," Minatsuki drawled. "You're a tick in my side, and annoying as fuck, but you aren't - and can't - hurt me."
okay, now the pain's coming
"And look at you, making fun of everyone, picking and picking at them and being the most...irritating...child imaginable. That's all you are. A child. A stupid child who doesn't know how to do anything but tease people."
She was just like Potter. Just as childish and petty and mean.
"You want me to hurt you? Because I can. I can!"
Mina fucks the Joker in another game if mine. I am so ready to write this pain!
"Yeah?" she drawled readily, squirming a little as if she were getting situated on a couch to watch a good movie.
Unlike a childhood enemy, Minatsuki saw nothing but her simply darling father with his inability to communicate frustration without his fists or violence, and a little bit of perhaps a cracked Senji or a normal Genkaku who was just really turned on by doing this to her. Either way, it disgusted her, and the word 'pathetic' rolled off her tongue once more.
"Yeah, go ahead cunt fucker. Give me a little tickle."
Mina thumpped her chest as if to paint a bullseye on it.
"Right here, would ya? Or across my shoulders - I've always bed pretty fucking ticklish there."
God, I so hope you mean 'fucks' as in 'fucks up'
Right now, it was her turn.
"I'll do more than tickle you," he snarled. He flicked his wand in the air and the Levicorpus spell ended. Minatsuki crashed to the ground at Snape's feet, face down.
He'd never had a chance to try out his new spell on a person before. It worked well enough on the rats in the dungeons, but on a person...
Well, what better chance to test it than on Minatsuki? And with all that blood she had, it would be interesting...
Before the girl could recover from being dropped on her face, Snape pointed his wand at her exposed back. He slashed it like a sword through the air, several wild, violent strokes, and with each one, he thought how much she deserved this.
"SECTUMPSEMPRA!"
The effect was immediate. Slashes and gashes appeared on her back, mimicking the motion of his wand. Rips in her clothes, on her skin, blood pouring out.
To bleed forever.
"Hurt enough?"
....uh. that too. sometimes.
But before her death threat could leave her lips, Minatsuki choked. Her back, open and exposed to his attack, was burning - stinging and yet sickly wet with her own blood. It took her a moment to realize what was happening, but as the cool air of the hallway stung at her exposed flesh, the teen heaved - inhaling a deep breath as her eyes went wide and her mouth hung open for a mere split second.
It hurt.
There was nothing tickling about this. And it wasn't even a reasonable pain she could handle and -
"ARGH!!!"
She jerked, whole body pitching into uncontrollable convulsions as loud and high pitched, utterly girly and pained screams ripped from her throat. Those were uncontrollable as well, but there was a distinct panic rushing through her veins as anemia hit, hard and fast. Her hair whips became listless and useless, receding into normal hair strands again as she twitched and thrashed in a rapidly expanding puddle of her own blood.
Too much blood. Far too much, really.
It may sound silly with her antics and all the horrible people she associated with just to piss off but... Minatsuki didn't really want to die. Not here, and definitely not at this losers hand.
Fuck.
...ew
"Don't look so cocky now!" Snape jeered as she screamed again and again. Her back was a ruin, ragged strips of cloth and skin amongst the blood pumping out.
If she kept bleeding, she would die. She would die like the rats in the Hogwarts dungeons.
But he didn't want her to die. She was annoying and horrible, and she deserved this pain after all she'd done, but Snape didn't want to be a murderer.
"Enough." He crouched down beside her in the sticky blood. He ran his wand over her flesh and muttered something that sounded like a song. The countercurse.
"Work faster," he hissed, a note of panic entering his voice. He muttered the countercurse over and over again, watching her flesh slowly knit together. "Come on..."
Hey! He's drop dead sexy!
She was tired, and cold and couldn't...she couldn't fucking move, and even in her current state Mina was still able to be irritated at herself for this.
And some part of her was also...sad... And scared. She didn't want to die. The teen had no idea what the boy was doing to her back and couldn't really concentrate on it either, considering she was this close to fainting and the only thing on her lips was a sigh that sounded oddly like no and Yoh at the same time.
Much as I love the Joker, 'sexy' is not a word I would ascribe to him
She spoke, or groaned. No.
"You won't die," he hissed at her, but there was no real vitriol in his voice this time. "You've lost too much blood, but you won't die."
He wanted to tell her, to remind her, that he'd won. That he'd beaten her and that was the price of crossing Severus Snape. But he couldn't say it. She'd know, though.
He really should stay and help her.
Wordlessly, he stood and siphoned away the blood on his clothes by magic. He wanted to leave, but he didn't.
Da-da-da-daaaaaa!!
Yoh was cursing himself, how could he have missed this? How could he have been so stupid? How could he have not been there when his sister needed him? Rage shook his body and pumped loudly in his ears. He had made a promise to her! He promised Minatsuki he would be protect her and this little shit made him break it! This little shit may have...
Yoh couldn't help but run an infinite number of horrific scenarios in his head. The terrible things that could have happened to his baby sister because he'd been too preoccupied to save her.
His hand tightened on Snape's throat. "Give me one good reason why I shouldn't kill you right now!"
Well, shit. My actions have consequences!
Snape lifted his wand ever so slightly, not so much that Yoh could grab it, but enough so he could use it if he had to. When he had to. "Because I can kill you first," Snape choked.
But he wouldn't kill Yoh. He just had to get away from him.
CONSEQUENCES OF THE YOH KIND
My least favorite kind!
Perhaps this was just another person to get revenge on later.
Maybe this was enough revenge for now.
He sobbed as he tried to break free from Yoh. "Let me go," he snarled, trying to sound menacing. "I'll make you pay."
>B[ You're in trouble, Limey
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Yoh's words barely registered to Snape. All he could focus on was his pain and the dim need to find his wand. With his unhurt hand he groped around on the ground for where it fell. Insanely, all he could think of in his head was Accio wand, Accio wand over and over, for all the good it would do.
"She deserved it," he managed to spit out. He knew it was the wrong thing to say, but it was true. The stupid girl got what she deserved.
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Then came an icy silence following Snape's words. Yoh crouched down to Snape's level with his hands on his knees. He shook his head slowly, almost sadly. "Wrong thing to say," he said finally, straightening. "Wrong thing to say!" With that final word he kicked Snape in the stomach, he did not hold back. The kick was hard enough, strong enough, and well placed taht it could make Snape buckle over despite himself. It might make him throw up. But it was not quite enough to make him blackout. It was a trick Yoh learned from his father.
But he wasn't finished. He wanted to hear bones break, he wanted to hear Snape gurgle, too injured to scream. He wanted him not to take his words back, but to realize what those words meant. There was a satisfying little snap as Yoh's foot hit Snape again, this time hitting his face, breaking the Slytherin's nose.
Yoh bent down again, inspecting the damage as if Snape were a piece of artwork in a museum Yoh was passing through. His features reflected brief mild interest at best.
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The other part, the part in his broken wrist and nose, wanted to sink into the floor and never see Yoh or Minatsuki again. More than anything, Snape wanted to be back at Hogwarts where his biggest concerns were homework and Potter.
At least Potter never broke any of Snape's bones.
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He understood that Yoh was dangerous, and mad.
He understood that Yoh could stand to be taken down a peg or two.
He understood that Minatskui would be left alone. Unless she bothered Snape again and needed to be chased off.
But Snape couldn't speak, so he just did the closest thing he could to a nod.
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"Good," he said. He stood then, and crossed to his sister. With unbelievable tenderness and gentleness from someone obviously capable of so much damage Yoh scooped up his little sister's limp form. He muttered an apology to her carried her from the room, supporting her like a parent. He didn't look back at Snape again, but left him there bruised and bleeding.
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When he finally reached his wand, he gripped it in his left hand, curled over on the floor, and tried to think of every healing spell he knew. The list was pitifully short. So he lay on the ground, in pain and full of hatred and what might have been regret.
/continues this bitch 'cause she can
She'd missed the part where her darling big brother had come in to play hero, and thus when arms wrapped around her frame and lifted her, jostling her person a little, the brunette - for some unholy reason - thought that the greasy haired boy was touching her, moving her to some other location to continue what they'd started here.
It felt as if lead had replaced all her bones, but the Deadman still managed to struggle - a little through her anemia, and her blood smeared face turned, lips parting to emit the croak of a voice she'd been left to.
"No. No, don't - fucking touch me."
LOL AWESOME
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Her eyes were rolling, finding it utterly impossible to focus on any one thing other than just how much her back her and the fact her face was swelling rather unattractivly. "Ow... - I'm gonna...ngh, I'm gonna kill him," she hissed, tone low and pained and utterly determined despite her whole body having just taken a beating that almost proved she couldn't kill the wizard.
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"He fights...fucking dirty..." She's fading now. And fast. Consciousness is overrated.
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