http://worldsrunnerup.livejournal.com/ ([identity profile] worldsrunnerup.livejournal.com) wrote in [community profile] badfic_logs 2010-08-08 11:49 pm (UTC)

Re: Breakfast (Monday)

[Mello moves his plate away a little but gives Matt another bite. He's sharing you can't ask for more than that]

I wonder if he's the main character. That doesn't make sense, nothing has happened specifically to him. Nothing that sets him apart from the rest of us. I don't know whether she's doing it on purpose or whether she's just a bad writer.

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